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11 October 2008 @ 08:51 pm
of trains and broken hearts  
Author : mariegina
Rating : G
Pairing : Kumako/Riku
Summary : Their last goodbye, his last words. and the many unspoken feelings in between.

I love you

your last words,
our last chance.
words that haunt,
words that linger.
hearts that stir
relived memories
your hand on the glass
and mine-
mine close to yours
yearning to reach out
to scream and shout
they hang in my mouth
the trains that speeds up
the dust that clouds my vision
leaving behind a broken heart
mine, and also yours

I miss you love
I love you too
my silent response
our lost chance
(Anonymous) on October 13th, 2008 01:18 pm (UTC)
wow, this was really fast-paced and breathless, like the trains that speeds up and the sudden gentle tone at the end is shocking and heartbreaking; I miss you love / I love you too. my favourite poem-thing from you.
Cathy: And they say I have no lifecatslove17 on October 14th, 2008 08:15 am (UTC)
Wow. You're banner is Yamapi. Was it always yamapi?

And now onto the more important stuff.

I swear you sent me a poem kinda similar to this one, I swear it, but it was longer.

I must admit my favourite bit is my silent response our lost chance. I'm crap at poetry, writing it, reading it, understanding it, but that bit sounded beautiful on it's own.

I am sorry I can't comment much. And what fandom is this? And who cares? Because it sounds beautiful on it's own. I wish I could comment back in poem form. But I'd probably just end up with some shit ass limerick.

your hand on the glass and mine-. And this, depending in what scenario it can be so sexy and bittersweet and longing at the same time.
Marieginamariegina on October 14th, 2008 11:06 am (UTC)
lol, yes. it was always yamapi.

ehh.. I'm not sure if I did. And if I did, it was probably shorter. I lengthened this before posting.

lol yeah. but really. they're just kids. XD so it's just longing and bittersweet.